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RE: From my mind, to the pages. | My first screenplay is in production.

in CineTVlast year

Wow! I looove the plot of your first screenplay! As I read the synopsis, I just wish I could watch it in a movie like right now. 😄

My suggestion - how about you write that the man was kidnapped by a lady he had a dalliance with because she's pregnant and wants a life with him.

OR the wife was kidnapped by a man (gang leader or a rich, powerful man) because he discovered the pregnancy kit she thought she disposed of and wants his baby.

Sorry if the suggestions sounds cliché or cheesy. 😄😄 But you are doing great! All the best on your first production.

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Nice ideas, @kemmyb... Haha! It was good to read them.

Thanks for the comment.